OASIS competitor: Ellie

Okay... I feel like writin a critique but I also feel like goin nuts.
So here goes nothin!

First of all, I have no freakin idea wat oasis oct thingy is, so I gave it less impact... And I guess vision, too. But I like the shadow, though it doesnt seem all THAT cool, u know. The hair is actually pretty epic, and so is the face, I guess. Her feet look OK, maybe(I cant write "I guess" everywhere, Einstein) but the arm... When I saw it, I thought somethin like," Holy sh*t! Wat the heck is WRONG?!" Simple. ALL OF IT!!! Its too small, smaller than the rest of the body, outta proportion. The upper arm(is it the part of the arm ur hand is attached to?) is smaller than the rest of the arm. It seems bent backwaads, so if she was facin the other side, it would look okay... Apart from her hand being turned inside out and back in! U need good imagination to see it that way, budddy. Take it from the best in the business. The cloth thingy over her other arm hides her arm and makes the first arm( her left one) seem freakin displaced. The ONLY good thing here is her face, the only thing drawn properly, if not perfectly...

Okay vision, I guess(I know, Einstein, I said it before), great originality and technique but the impact is, like... Man, I dont wanna swear or anythin, u see(I'm not like some of u guys out there, u know).
This sucks, overall. No offence.
Good work anyways(yea, I know its not able to qualify for a"good work" complement, but ahh forget it).